Andrea - The STORY!!!! It was amazing! I love how you brought your life to life in the flip book and used so much color. I really like how you put all your effort into it and did not lack in any aspect.
Bryan - I loved the story and the concept behind the flip book!!! Going through what we have learned in class was incredible. I wish that more effort was put into the coloring and the drawings. The book seemed it could of used more time spent on it.
Kirby - The ocean! It stood out so much! I don't know why but it stood out so much for me.
Holly - The dragon. It was amazing! I wish you put that much effort into the whole book and created something outstanding.
Katelyn - I really loved how you introduced a character into the story but I wish you continued that throughout the rest of the book.
Leah - I loved the story of the caterpillar and how they talked in the story. I wish that you used more of the page and maybe expanded on the story.
Ralph - The ballon and elephant where extremely well drawn out and colored beautifully. I wish it had an overlaying story that could bring the whole book together.
Kyle - I really like how you told a story about Boston history. It was really unique to do that but it worked really well. I wish that there was more to the story than such a short history about Boston.
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